Hey everyone -
We really do appreciate you guys taking time to comment, so thank you so much to those who do. Today, we've updated LSF, not only with a new layout, but also with a new chapter, chapter nine of the 'Cannonball Trilogy,' *and* two new short fics. Chelsi and I participated in The Spark Inside Challenge. She wrote "Peanut Butter & Jelly" and I wrote "Happenstance," and we have now posted them on Last Stop as well.
We hope you guys will take time to read all the new updates and drop back here to leave us comments! Love it or hate it, we want to know.
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6 comments:
Amazing chapter. I can see a twist coming soon or maybe it's there and i'm not seeing it yet i'm intreged.
happenstance great short loved it poor Tay love that he put his little girl first LOVE IT.
peanut butter & jelly So Cute love granma hanson (. You need a rolling pin?”) that had me lauthing so hard.
love end to.
Love Hayley B
Thanks so much Hayley, we really appreciate that you always take time to comment. It certainly brightens my day, and I'm sure it brightens Chelsi's as well. We have lots up our sleeves, we're just laying the ground work.
Question for you - do you honestly think the re-write is better, and stronger than the original so far?
And thanks so much for your comment on the short as well. The little girl was a last second thing, I hadn't planned it, but she fit so well. :)
And Chelsi's short was great, wasn't it? The rolling pin thing was really great. She's got a lot of wit as a writer. I've told her many times that her wit tends to balance out my insatiable need for drama.
Thanks so much hon.
Tiff
Hi Tiff
Yeah i do think the re write is stronger the characters are more defined i think as there is more personal things coming from them like the first time Tay and Alex had lunch she spoke of her past releships i think it shows a different side to all of them.
I did really love the first verson to but i think all storys have there amazing points. Like in the first verson i loved how Tay and Riley dreamed about eachother before they meet.
thats just what i think.
Love Hayley B
Thanks so much Hayley. We really haven't gotten much feedback as to whether or not people liked the first version better, so I was curious. And trust me when I say we're coming up with all kinds of different, even possibly more logical, twists for this version.
I read this chapter but forgot to comment. I love it ...keep it comimg.
Michelle G
Thanks Hayley and Michelle. =)
Like Tiffany said, we've got many, many twists. And things are starting to come together. Up until now, we've basically been laying the foundation for what's to come, but we're starting to get into the good stuff. And I don't know about you guys, but I'm excited. =)
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